Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Metacognitive Analysis


Fernandez, Adelaida
English 114B
Professor Sean Pessin
24 April 2013
Metacognitive Analysis
I began writing my first hybrid essay a few hours ago, before that I had just learned what a hybrid essay was, a month ago. It was most definitely different from other forms of writing I had ever encountered. Not only can a hybrid essay be a form of an electronic writing but it can also be different forms of writing put into one page/assignment, such as photos and poems, to keep the writing moving forward.
When I first heard the term “Hybrid Essay”, I was confused. I was so certain that I had already known every form of essays; I had assumed we learned all the different types of essays in high school. After viewing a few examples in class, I had an idea on how I wanted to go about on my hybrid essay but once I actually started the writing process, I went a different direction.
I began my essay with discussing about what a blog in general was. What I intended to do when I first heard of hybrid essays, was to use photos just as the hybrid essay, The Basement, yet I found it quite difficult with my topic. So instead I went towards the format that the hybrid essay, SECTION 404 OF THE CLEAN WATER ACT AND THE SANTA CRUZ RIVER AND SHARK, SUBTITLED”THIS TROUBLESOME REGULATORY CONSTRAINT.” used, in which the author, Cheyenne Nimes, writes about her topic and at the very end she inserts a poem to support her argument.
After discussing about blogs in general, I went about talking about my blog in terms of significance and purpose. I chose to insert a poem in the very end to support my argument instead of the inserting photos throughout the essay because I felt that my argument was more affective and more presentable this way. I feel that the poem given is a perfect example of what I was trying to do with my blog and my essay; it talks about being a vegetarian with praise and kindness all without pressuring others to feel the need to be vegetarian which is an important thing to do when discussing topics such as vegetarianism.
Once I got to the middle of my essay, I had realized that I was doing it with ease and quite quickly. I normally do not have any trouble writing essays but I do take quite some time to get my ideas down depending on my interest in the assignment. Writing this hybrid essay was really enjoyable and allowed my ideas to just flow through the page which is something all writers should be doing when writing.
Something that this hybrid essay has taught me was that I’m not done learning nor am I anywhere near done learning about essays or any other form of writing. Knowledge is in fact endless and that is something I never took into consideration until now. I do hope to use this form of writing in future assignments whether it’s for school or work, because such a form of writing is effective.

Hybrid Essay


Fernandez, Adelaida
Professor Sean Pessin
English 114B
30 April 2013
Hybrid Essay
Everything has become a trend now days such as being a “vegetarian”. Now I quote the word vegetarian because it is one of those things that people know of but really have no clue as to what it is. For instance, a vegetarian does not eat meat of any kind nor food that contains meat of any kind but can in fact eat egg and other dairy products, vegetarians also do not use items made of or tested on animals. I chose to blog about vegetarianism because I can relate to it and because vegetarianism is my life. Vegetarianism is a lifestyle and I strongly believe that people do not understand what it truly means to be a vegetarian. My purpose throughout this whole blog was to simply inform and not to persuade and maybe inspire those who have wanted to always try it out. I do not mind those who eat meat, if you are healthy then good for you, but I do mind those who are ignorant towards vegetarianism and make ignorant remarks about vegetarianism as if they had some degree in nutrition or some degree in life, and this goes towards vegetarians and non-vegetarians. There are in fact many vegetarians that are not even aware of what a true vegetarian does or is; a majority of the time everyone just assumes that vegetarianism is just a diet.
For one, vegetarianism is being acknowledgeable towards an animals’ life. If you took the time to think about it, would it not be pretty hypocritical for someone to be against the killing of an animal for food yet be ok with the killing of an animal for household products? Yes, of course it would be. It would be seen as hypocritical because this person is saying they care for an animals’ life when they really do not, they are only showing care for what their corpse is being used for. In reality a vegetarian should not eat starburst, yes the candy starburst because it is in fact made of pig fat which is the exact same thing as eating bacon, but this is not what I am referring to. I am referring to vegetarians not wearing leather, leather is made of both cow and alligator skin. Vegetarians should not be using certain bar soaps or other household item because most are made with animal fat, see most vegetarians do not know that. There are in fact many brands that are vegan and it goes so far as applying it towards toothpaste, bar soap, mouthwash, deodorant, etc. because all of these items are in fact made with animals and/or animal tested which is applied in the acknowledgment of an animals’ life. Vegetarians are and should be against the testing of animals because a majority of the time these animals are harmed and often killed for our benefits when there are in fact other resources for us to get what we need. Vegetarians are against the testing of animals not only because it is harmful to them but because they are just being used, no dog is going to use Colgate Total Whitening, dogs have their own dog toothpaste that has nothing to do with Colgate what so ever. A very important characteristic that vegetarians have is that they find different resources to create what is needed and essential for living and using those resources to be able to spare an animals’ life.
A strong subtopic I discussed in this blog was stereotypes! There are obviously stereotypes for everything in life, but of course I am referring to vegetarianism stereotypes. The biggest stereotype any vegetarian can ever receive is that we as vegetarians are only trying to lose weight. I for one see this stereotype as inane. What if I were to say, “People go to fast food places to get fat”, no, people go there for many different reasons but to get fat is most definitely not one of those reasons, it is just a side effect of eating fast food. Same concept applies to vegetarianism, being thin becomes a side effect because we do not consume fat from animals, we only consume what the body needs thus we do not gain that extra weight, so in reality we are not necessarily “losing weight” we just do not gain the unnecessary weight yet of course no one ever sees that. Another stereotype would be when someone says vegetarians don’t get enough or any protein what so ever. It is as if everyone refuses to acknowledge the existence of eggs, tofu, beans, and peanuts. There are in fact two contradicting stereotypes the first being that all vegetarians are super healthy and the second is that vegetarianism is not healthy at all. I have been a vegetarian for thirteen years and I can guarantee you that I am not always “healthy”, by that I mean, I eat candy, chips and drink soda just like any regular human being people assume we are rabbits and just eat carrots, that is not true at all! Now about vegetarianism not being healthy is and is not true. It is not true because it is in fact the healthiest meal plan anyone can ever have if done right. For instance, did you know that a vegetarian is more likely to live seven years longer than non-vegetarians? Now, It is true because at often times when someone first becomes a vegetarian, they really do not know how to portion their meals or do not get all the nutrients that the body needs and can often times result in that person getting sick in which case, yes vegetarianism is not healthy.
I inserted this poem because it is someone talking graciously about a vegetarian, and it ties in with what I am trying to say. It does not try to guilt others or persuade others that vegetarianism is something that everyone should get into but it simply says that it is a good thing.

The Vegetarian by Anonymous

Her breath smells of lemon grass, rose hips,

and ferns.  She eats lilies.  She is almost a saint.

Here the absence of desire

sits on a hard chair, reads without turning pages.

Abstinence is never speculative.  For her

the salmon never swim upstream, or game birds

worry the underbrush.  She never says:

I can imagine or

This is what I want or

I hated him.

Not to need is power.

Her appetites are folded in the corner.

They are teeming and urgent

as the dreams of the Masai.

They are smooth, old scars.

They are forgotten.

Blessed are the empty.   Herbaceous darling,

you shall be the apple of God’s eye.

The eyes of God are twin, untroubled pools,

the efflorescence of stones.
            While writing this blog, I found amazing people that have done things to spread awareness such as Sir James Paul McCartney. I honestly do not like The Beatles but I have mad respect for that man and what he does with his wealth and fame such as the charities he helps and what he did with The Simpsons.
Vegetarianism to me, is my life. It honestly is. I may not preach about it and I may not try to convince others to become vegetarians but that does not change the fact that it is me. I am living proof that stereotypes are just stereotypes, I am living proof that it is in fact a lifestyle and has nothing to do with a “diet”, and most importantly I am living proof of health.
Works Cited
"The Vegetarian." Poetry and Writing. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Apr. 2013.
Fernandez, Adelaida. "Vegetarianism." Vegetarianism. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Apr. 2013.

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Conclusion


I first started this blog as an English assignment but then it became much more than that, I have learned a lot about vegetarianism in this past month while writing this blog, it makes me feel like a horrible vegetarian for not knowing, but knowledge is power. Anyway, I feel that this blog has helped me grow as a vegetarian and I strongly believe that I was able to get my point across to my readers such as being able to go away from stereotypes, giving examples of healthy vegetarians without excluding the fact that there are unhealthy vegetarians,  and providing a vegetarians meal plan. I believe that i was able to do this blog in a way that defends vegetarians without trying to pressure or guilt trip non vegetarians to become vegetarians. Most of all, this blog is written in the point of view of a vegetarian.

Interesting Facts


http://www.health24.com/Diet-and-nutrition/Healthy-diets/10-interesting-vegetarian-facts-20120721
Just a couple of some interesting facts that I haven't mentioned and facts that don't ever come to mind. This article states 10 facts, but i'll only put a couple and discuss them a bit further.

  • "Vegetarianism has traditionally been linked to the people of ancient India. Even today, Indians make up more than 70 percent of the worlds vegetarian population"
I personally did not know this myself, but after doing further research I have found this to be true. What I already did know, is that Indians do not eat as much meat as other cultures in the world. After doing some research I found that Indians are vegetarians due to religious belief.
  • "The first Vegetarian Society was formed in 1874 in England. The main aim of the members was to dispel the common belief that it's not possible to lead a healthy life without eating meat."
I also did not know this, but I did know that the word "Vegetarian" derived from the United Kingdom. I did find some interesting facts of the president of the first vegetarian society, Mr. William Horsell, and how he began this society. I think it's really cool that it was started in order to prove, what is now a stereotype, wrong. 

LA's Poet Laureate


On April 3, 2013 I had the opportunity to visit a public reading held on campus at CSUN and hear LA’s poet Laureate. The reading took place in CSUN's Jerome Richfield Hall and was from 6pm to 8pm. The event was arranged by one of CSUN's clubs, NCWC. There was not a sign in sheet or anything, everything seemed pretty casual as you walked in. The event was completely free, it was not fancy, and there were no handouts or programs. To the back of the room there was a table with some snacks such as crackers, bread, and cheese. Two of her books were being sold, Passing and A Wild Sunrise. There were roughly 45+ seats everyone was sitting, although I chose to stand. There was an icebreaker before the event began which was by my professor and the club's president, Sean Pessin, before she got in back of the podium to speak, a young man, Cody, introduced her to the crowd. Laureate read some poems from her books. She talked about past experiences and told the crowd that she was going to be herself because the crowd was different than those she normally speaks to. She was a former professor here at CSUN but left due to the negativity she received, she said that her teaching years were the worst yet she was able to turn such negativity into a piece of art, her poetry. Although she is not a vegetarian and has nothing to do with my blog, I thought I should share this with you guys because, as vegetarians we do receive a lot of negativity and we can learn from her, and maybe one day we can take this negativity and turn it into something amazing.

Sir James Paul McCartney


Famous musician, born June 18, 1942, Sir James Paul McCartney gained worldwide fame as a member of the Beatles. McCartney is described as the "most successful composer and recording artist of all time" and as the "most successful songwriter". Over 2,200 artists have covered his Beatles song "Yesterday" more than any other song in history. McCartney has written and/or co-written 32 songs that have reached number one on the Billboard Hot 100. After the Beatles' break up, he formed Wings with his first wife, Linda, and singer songwriter Denny Laine. "Mull of Kintyre" by Wings from 1977, is one of the all-time-best-selling singles in the United Kingdom. McCartney was inducted into the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame as a solo artist in March of 1999. The thing that amazes me most about this talented man, is not that he is a vegetarian, but how he uses his fame and fortune to better the world. McCartney promotes charities such as animal rights, seal hunting, landmines, vegetarianism, poverty, and music education. Do you recall one of my first posts about the Simpsons episode, "Lisa the Vegetarian" that aired in October of 1995? Well McCartney and his first wife guest starred in that episode but McCartney had a condition if he were to guest star. His condition was that Lisa would remain a vegetarian for the rest of the series. Instead of having outrageous conditions that most stars have, h just wanted something simple that can spread awareness.

Joe Namath

Former famous Quarterback football player , born May 31, 1943, Joe Namath began playing college football at University of Alabama from 1962-1964. Namath then played professional football for thirteen years, in the 1960s and 1970s, in the American Football League (AFL) and in the National Football League (NFL). He played for the New York Jets in the American Football League and finished his career playing for National Football League's Los Angeles Rams. Namath had played 143 games with 68 wins, 71 losses, and 4 ties. In his career he threw 173 touchdowns, 220 interceptions, and completed 1,886 passes for 27,663 yards. He was the first quarterback to throw 4,000 yards in one season (1967). He was also ranked 96 on The Sporting News' list of 100 Greatest Football Players. This blog is about Vegetarianism, what does all this football stuff have to with vegetarianism you may ask? Well did you know that this former football player, who was elected to the Hall of Fame in 1985, is a vegetarian? Yeah, you must have thought I was joking when I said famous athletes are in fact vegetarian. This Super bowl champion is well known in the vegetarian community for this vegetarian quote, "I have been a vegetarian for a few years. Fred Dryer of the rams has been one for 10 years. It shows you don't need meat to play football.", and he is absolutely correct. As a vegetarian he was able to maintain a healthy and fit lifestyle.